User contributions for Bruce

10:5610:56, 27 October 2023 diff hist +1 m EN108.28 Rhine No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
09:3409:34, 27 October 2023 diff hist +4 EN103.26 Tale Change due to English grammar Tag: Visual edit
09:3009:30, 27 October 2023 diff hist +5 EN103.26 Tale Changed "instructed" to "passed along to" (BITJVDE) Tag: Visual edit
08:5208:52, 27 October 2023 diff hist +31 EN100.01 Teachings2 Several changes for ease of reading or to align with the source Tag: Visual edit
08:2008:20, 27 October 2023 diff hist +1 EN100.01 Teachings2 Several changes for ease of reading or to align with the source Tag: Visual edit

14:3014:30, 26 October 2023 diff hist +1 EN097.28 Teachings1 Changed "people" to "mankind" (MÀNNISKA) Tag: Visual edit
14:0214:02, 26 October 2023 diff hist 0 EN095.20 Eulogy Several changes to align closer with the source Tag: Visual edit
13:4113:41, 26 October 2023 diff hist +9 m EN095.20 Eulogy No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
13:3913:39, 26 October 2023 diff hist −3 EN093.18 Arrow No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
13:3013:30, 26 October 2023 diff hist −5 m EN093.18 Arrow No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
13:0513:05, 26 October 2023 diff hist +6 EN093.18 Arrow No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
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08:5408:54, 24 October 2023 diff hist −2 EN087.19 Adelbrost Changed "according to what my mother recounted" to "in accordance with the advice of my mother" (VP ALSA.DÉNERA WISA AS MINE MEM SPROKEN HET) Tag: Visual edit
07:5707:57, 24 October 2023 diff hist +4 m EN087.19 Adelbrost No edit summary Tag: Visual edit

19:5219:52, 20 October 2023 diff hist +9 EN025.04 Security Added "creating" because one does not "win" enemies Tag: Visual edit
19:1819:18, 20 October 2023 diff hist −3 m EN014.09 Festa No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
13:3713:37, 20 October 2023 diff hist −1 m EN095.20 Eulogy No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
13:3613:36, 20 October 2023 diff hist 0 m EN095.20 Eulogy No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
13:1313:13, 20 October 2023 diff hist −3 m EN091.11 Treason No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
12:5712:57, 20 October 2023 diff hist 0 m EN085.12 Medeasblik No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
12:5412:54, 20 October 2023 diff hist −6 m EN085.12 Medeasblik No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
12:5312:53, 20 October 2023 diff hist +43 EN085.12 Medeasblik Tentative change Tag: Visual edit
10:3410:34, 20 October 2023 diff hist 0 EN085.12 Medeasblik Changed "may all" to "all may" - it is somewhat unclear what is meant, but it seems to be saying "What happened after this (is close enough in time that) the people will remember" rather than an adjuration to remember Tag: Visual edit
10:2910:29, 20 October 2023 diff hist −24 EN085.12 Medeasblik Change literally aligns less closely with source, but conveys the joke better, I think Tag: Visual edit
10:2010:20, 20 October 2023 diff hist +6 EN085.12 Medeasblik stylistic change to align with source Tag: Visual edit

15:2115:21, 19 October 2023 diff hist +17 EN082.01 Frana Several changes to align closer with the source Tag: Visual edit
15:0915:09, 19 October 2023 diff hist +4 m EN082.01 Frana No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
15:0115:01, 19 October 2023 diff hist −5 m EN082.01 Frana No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
14:5614:56, 19 October 2023 diff hist +11 m EN082.01 Frana No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
14:5414:54, 19 October 2023 diff hist +12 EN082.01 Frana Expanded on "had the mother..." --> "ordered that the mother be..." - mostly for ease of reading/understanding Tag: Visual edit
14:4914:49, 19 October 2023 diff hist +5 m EN082.01 Frana No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
14:4814:48, 19 October 2023 diff hist +6 EN082.01 Frana Several Tag: Visual edit
10:2010:20, 19 October 2023 diff hist −1 EN085.12 Medeasblik Changed “honorary” to “ honored” as it fits better here Tag: Visual edit
07:3307:33, 19 October 2023 diff hist −2 m EN079.11 Denmarks No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
07:3007:30, 19 October 2023 diff hist 0 m EN079.11 Denmarks No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
07:2907:29, 19 October 2023 diff hist −11 EN079.11 Denmarks Second change - aligns better with source Tag: Visual edit
07:2007:20, 19 October 2023 diff hist −15 EN079.11 Denmarks Deleted "they had left behind", because the Finns did not sneak into the villages the Skeanlanders left behind, but into the villages of the Danes, which were emptied of men due to the fighting - at least that makes more sense to me Tag: Visual edit
07:1607:16, 19 October 2023 diff hist +13 EN079.11 Denmarks Changed "eager" to "seized by a desire" to convey that they were reacting to a new opportunity - also, readers may confuse the Danes with the Skeanlander at this point, so this makes it easier to understand, I think Tag: Visual edit
07:0307:03, 19 October 2023 diff hist −41 EN079.11 Denmarks Several changes to align closer with the source Tag: Visual edit
06:4606:46, 19 October 2023 diff hist +17 EN079.11 Denmarks Added an aspect to align with source (DOR ÀND DERTENHÉD) Tag: Visual edit

13:2013:20, 18 October 2023 diff hist +2 EN00b.01 Liko Tentative change to broaden the meaning (PÁPE.KAPPE) Tag: Visual edit
10:2810:28, 18 October 2023 diff hist +16 EN076.13 Athenia Changed "leeches" to "blood-sucking parasites" - a) because there may be multiple blood suckers in a swamp (e.g., mosquitoes) and b) because, given the word "LÉTSA" (Chapter 3a. [017]), the word "leech" must have it's origin in the word for "healer" (as they were, and are again today, used in medicine) and thus should be disentangled from negative connotation Tag: Visual edit
10:1310:13, 18 October 2023 diff hist +23 m EN076.13 Athenia No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
10:1010:10, 18 October 2023 diff hist −2 EN076.13 Athenia Changed "most beautiful" to "best looking" to align with the superficial nature of the "beauty" Tag: Visual edit
10:0010:00, 18 October 2023 diff hist +1 EN076.13 Athenia Changed "Frya girl" to "Fryas girl" Tag: Visual edit
09:5609:56, 18 October 2023 diff hist +3 m EN076.13 Athenia No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
09:5409:54, 18 October 2023 diff hist +25 EN076.13 Athenia Adapted final clause to align closer with the original source Tag: Visual edit
09:4809:48, 18 October 2023 diff hist −6 EN075.08 Ulysus deleted apostrophes "Frya's" (possessive) --> "Fryas" (attributive) Tag: Visual edit
09:4009:40, 18 October 2023 diff hist +2 m EN075.08 Ulysus substituted a stronger adjective Tag: Visual edit

13:1013:10, 17 October 2023 diff hist +8 EN072.05 Geartmen Adapted second clause to align closer with the original source (VMBE THAT FIF RIN.STRÁMA MITH HIRI NÉI THA SÉ TO STRÁMA.) Tag: Visual edit

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